some people believe that schools do not do enough to teach young people about their health . Do you agree or disagree

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young peoples health has become a global issu...
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...on to the health hazards of young adults , I personally agree with this opinion be...
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...y many students live unhelathy lifestyle , and this will be further explained in t...
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...school boys and girls about their health , and one of them is that some males and ...
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...females still consume a lot of junk food . In other words , because parents are no...
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...to monitor their offspring eating habits , school management should be responsible...
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...ment should be responsible to guide them . this is supported by the incident rough...
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...ople are no longer important for schools . that is why home schooling has become m...
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...e are no longer important for schools . that is why home schooling has become more p...
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... future generations from unhealthy diets .Therefore , it can be clearly seen that ...
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...nts how to improve their physical health . In addition to this , some education...
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...stitutes do not engage young generations into sports activities as well . A prime...
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...erations into sports activities as well . A prime example is the finnish ministry...
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...level of fitness and overweight problems . Thus , the manner in which schools do n...
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...heir general health has been proven true . In conclusion , having manifested th...
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...arents want to bring up healthy children , schools should involve them into mental...
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...them into mental and physical activities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03529411765 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57807239388 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3872964684 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36480111563 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128587057351 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931687843576 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224516666317 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389779257712 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.