Your local college is organizing an event on the International Student’s Day. You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures. write a letter to the college head.
- Tell him/her about the topics you are going to talk about.
- Why would it be interesting for students?
- Ask questions about the arrangements.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding the International Day which we have scheduled on next Friday i.e. on 29th April,2019. Allow me to speak to our students about our country from different cultures.
I would like to discuss about our different cultures with them and the ways we can manifest the same to our guest by a play. All the students are welcome to take part on that particular play. The interested candidates need to register before 25th of April, and they can contact the concern person Mr. A Joshi at academic building.
Moreover, it will be live telecast on News Live and Republic Tv as well. we will be announcing cash award of Rs. 5000 along with trophy and certificate for the best play and other curriculum activities as well and will be published in front page of our school magazine.
I would be grateful if you could appoint a person to look after the photography and videography, so that the concern person can hie a professional photographer at our budget.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in anticipation
Yours Faithfully,
Simi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...e scheduled on next Friday i.e. on 29th April,2019. Allow me to speak to our students abou...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... on News Live and Republic Tv as well. we will be announcing cash award of Rs. 50...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83422459893 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76496962922 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.017251984 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173788369129 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771183930404 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772362111427 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101215247625 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949130171861 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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