Some people feel that certain workers like nurse,docters and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when others people like film stars and company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work they do
It is really true fact that certain workers like nurse,docters,teachers and soldiers they play an important role in our life and our society with out any expectation.their contribute are very remarkable.on the other side companies and celebrity do not play important role in our life and they pay lot of money rather than certain workers.
First and foremost,certain workers like nurse,doctors,teachers and soldiers. they not only work. they are second god of our life. they work for developed our country and society. With out any expectation. Teachers are taught our children and society and makes a educated and also country future. Doctors are second god because they can save patient life. they can spend their personal time on hospital. Nurses take care of ill people they can spend adequate amount of time day and night for help of patient.soldier can protected our country and all of as from ememies. With out care of their life so.
Secondly, company bosses and celebrities are paid more as compared to workers and they do not help country, they become in different professions like cricketers,Bollywood stars and companies ceo and so on. they can earn plethora amount of money. but they can not do any thing for society and country but they can spoil youngster time and money both. youngster seem to be attract film star, celebrity and companies bosses are waste of our time, however they can pay large amount of money.
In my opinion certain workers work hard for our country and society so on. they should be paid higher money rather than celebrity and companies bosses and give a lot of reputation
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Suggestion: , docters
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9852398524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07639772814 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49815498155 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.113426522 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190328317152 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636080728857 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692946836407 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138556423915 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397027554123 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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