Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
According to some individuals, the most happiest time in their lives is the juvenile age whereas in others opinion the grown ups are more happier in spite of having more responsibilities.
To embark on, on the one side of the coin the children are far from the responsibilities and they do not have any other worries other playing. For instance, if they have to go with parents to attend some parties such as a wedding party, due to which he/she might not be able to join their friends with whom he/she always play. It is indeed a difficult situation for parents to make them smile unless the meet a new friend at the party to play with.
On the other side of the coin, the adults have plethora of responsibilities such as Income, Salary, Office, Family Health, Kids School and many more. Despite having so much of responsibilities there are some kind of persons who knows how to manage time for fun as well. Those people love to enjoy the every single moment of life as they understood that the "Life" is a beautiful gift of god and is for once only. They do not want to waste time over thinking of their responsibilities rather they enjoy the moment and which help them to take the responsibilities with ease. The adults have no bounds to have fun as the adolescent has some boundaries. For instance, if the adults wants to go somewhere they do not need to take permission or ask for money as long as they are independent.
To recapitulate, the children are happy enough at their age as they do not have any responsibilities . However, the grown-ups are more happier, despite having massive responsibilities as compared to the adolescent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
According to some individuals, the most happiest time in their lives is the juvenile age...
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Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
According to some individuals, the most happiest time in their lives is the juvenile age...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...eas in others opinion the grown ups are more happier in spite of having more responsibilitie...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...n their friends with whom he/she always play. It is indeed a difficult situation for...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...much of responsibilities there are some kind of persons who knows how to manage time...
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Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as they do not have any responsibilities . However, the grown-ups are more happier...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...sibilities . However, the grown-ups are more happier, despite having massive responsibilitie...
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Line 6, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sibilities as compared to the adolescent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, kind of, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69759450172 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98009558473 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2866451808 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113254090533 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479651695832 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274989053078 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755017963421 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308542783949 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.