Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Life is a combination of light and darkness, happiness and sadness, satisfaction and regret regardless of age, time and gender. However, some people tend to believe that teenage years are magical and enjoyable times of one's life, while others opine that adulthood brings a lot of happiness despite the massive responsibilities. Is happiness truly found in life due to lesser commitment or due to freedom? In this essay, I will discuss both the arguments and present my views.
During adolescence, people are mostly aided by their parents in terms of financial aspects. Children do not have to face the terrible horrors of debts or any monetary problems. They are provided with a home, education and medical facilities, in fact, many countries provide free education to their young citizens. They have no complexities in life, apart from doing homework and adhere to certain rules and standards. However, they are extremely dependant on their parents and hence must follow their strict rules, perhaps, even without questioning. They do not possess the freedom to, for example, do whatever they like or buy whatever they want. Although kids must be restricted to a certain level to build their character and personality, it is quite hard to succumb to parents and teachers, especially at such a vulnerable age.
On the other hand, there are myriad of responsibilities for adults like looking after their family, paying the rent, going to job undertaking extra courses to get a higher salary and so on. For instance, parents have the immense duty to provide their children with food, education and a roof above their head. Along with that, their contribution is indispensable to the upbringing of their child. In the case of working adults, there is no room for running away from their duties. Nevertheless, they enjoy a great deal of freedom. Other than following the basic social rules, an adult can watch anything, go anywhere, anytime they desire and also have the provision to drink or smoke.
To conclude, adolescence is one of the best moments of everybody's life. Having said that, being an adult is much more pleasant and joyful because, in my perspective, happiness lies in freedom.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ears are magical and enjoyable times of ones life, while others opine that adulthood...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...standards. However, they are extremely dependant on their parents and hence must follow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20661157025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08201309641 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625344352617 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7342136141 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4736842105 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107969726117 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330249413056 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398555855166 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688063329069 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395978735304 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.