You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter.
Explain when and from where you rented it
Describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir,
I booked a car from your showroom for a six days short term trip to Murree with my family. Unfortunately, while we were heading towards our destination, we had a small accident. I am writing to report you about this accident.
On 5th April, I rented a car from your showroom located on Multan road for a six days holiday trip with my family. The car was blue color, Suzuki Mehran with model no: LEB-18. I was driving the car steadily with normal speed of 100Kmph, when we met an accident.
It happened as a driver over took our car from the wrong side and hit with bang to the front bumper of our car. At once, I applied brakes and luckily, we escape a major accident. However, the car got a little dent on front bumper.
Immediately, I drove the car to nearby garage for repairing. After the car was being repaired, it was returned to showroom in good condition as verified by the staff present over there. Moreover, I received the expenses incurred on repairing the car because it has an insurance cover.
If you have any further queries, you can contact me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Batool
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| 2019-04-28 | Sara Batool | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59134615385 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48013091818 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2077615255 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264151947308 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888508401865 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085707659032 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160036176885 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09349272381 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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