Many people today use their phone for sending texts more than talking.
What are the reason for this?
Are there more advantage or disadvantage?
In today's Digital era people are using more technology which make their life easy and comfortable. Out of many electronic gadget, today we are going to discuss about mobile phone. it has it's own advantages and disadvantages, those who are using mobile phone regularly.
mobile phone is upgrade version of pager. When pager was introduce it was purely using a sending of message devise. Later on the technology became more advance and the birth of mobile phone taken a place. The advantage of mobile phone was that you can call a person and send you voice message to other person. it was live communication to any person on any part of the world. The technology was further became advance, and now the birth of many messanger app took the place. becuase of this the people are more adicted or attracted towards those application and now instead of calling a person on live they believe them the message throught their one of the messanger application.
The advantage of the using messanger app is, you can send them any message at any point of time. there are instances where we don't want to disturb any one the person because of various reason so the message is the best option where you can convey your message to opposite side of person. you can also share with them the Video, Photos and many more things and becuase of that you don't require to go physically and you can save your time too.
The biggest disadvantage of the messanger application is that people are more addicted for using this application and now that bonding and feeling become vanish due to talking to a person through message instead of a personal call.
In My view, there are advantage and disadvantage for using message instead of phone. person has to see the situation and accordingly use thier smart phone technology.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-28 | Praful Shah | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, as to, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7731629393 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48883634701 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479233226837 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4171593445 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279863305393 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100287601701 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709570525847 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180393734583 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616286741679 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.