2. It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, there is a trend that young people prefer to study in universities than in vocational schools. But it is impossible and un-useful for country to provide universities for most youngsters. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
It is unable to offer university for most young people. The first reason is that university could afford money to build campuses for all young people. Even if new campuses were constructed, it is difficult for university to operate and maintain. The second reason is that university entrance standards would need to be lower. As the result, students with low grades in entrance exams would enter universities but they unable to follow courses in universities. Even if they would graduate, they may not meet requirements of employers. Therefore, every year, there are thousands of graduated students could not find job.
It is not worth providing universities for high proportion of young people because many works do not require people with bachelor degree. Instead, employers usually need skilled worker in different fields such as construction, agriculture, nursing and tourism. Nowadays, many developed countries have been being lack of skilled technicians and they must hire people from developing countries. Therefore country should provide more vocational schools instead of too many universities. As the result, young people will have more options whether they should study university or vocational school. This would help to balance the percentage of people working in different works and sector of economy.
In conclusion I totally agree with the statement that country should not only focus on building university but also technique schools.
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- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- 2.It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... hire people from developing countries. Therefore country should provide more vocational ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4598540146 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86956021587 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7977416474 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256767938043 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897415040393 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983120236022 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155338833302 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486089264671 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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