You have just spent a week with a
friend on holiday When you got
home, you realised you had left
your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In
your letter:
thank your friend for the
holiday
explain that you left your
wallet in their house
give them instructions of how
to send it back to you
Dear Jack,
Hope this letter reach you perfectly. I'd like to thank you and Jean for the wonderful trip, we had the last week.
When I was writing this letter, all the cherishing moments were reminding in my mind. We had a wonderful day trip to Verona from Milano Centrale with kids, Sam & Peter, which was filled with fun. They added more fun to the trip. Italian dishes we had, during the trip was delicious. Lasagna Was my favourite.
When I was preparing for the office in the morning, I realized that I left my wallet in your guest room. It is inside the dressing table left side top drawer. Without it, I can't spend a day in the city, as I'd all my valid Identity Cards. So, please send me the wallet through Fedex to my home address.
Hope to get the wallet as soon as possible. Convey my regards to Jean and the kids. Cheers!
See you soon,
Robert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, Hope this letter reach you perfectly. Id...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... Hope this letter reach you perfectly. Id like to thank you and Jean for the wond...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onderful trip, we had the last week. When I was writing this letter, all the ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...delicious. Lasagna Was my favourite. When I was preparing for the office in t...
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Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ble left side top drawer. Without it, I cant spend a day in the city, as Id all my v...
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Line 6, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... it, I cant spend a day in the city, as Id all my valid Identity Cards. So, please...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t through Fedex to my home address. Hope to get the wallet as soon as possib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42236024845 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15183449842 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664596273292 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5415827423 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.8571428571 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.142857142857 4.34317383033 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204329580014 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662495711604 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740815527565 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116326417519 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110309613369 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.17 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.