Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
No doubt, there are many problematic environments which need to be resolved. Some people think that the dying out of many plants and animals is the momentous issue in people’s life, while others believe that we need to concern the more significant environmental problems rather than that one. In the scope of this essay, both of views will be thoroughly discussed and personally, I think besides the problem of the loss of specific plants and animals, there are still more problems need about on.
On the one hand, it is not deny that the number of plants and animals is becoming decrease dramatically that leads to many terrible results. The demolishing home of many wild species such as tigers, lions not only causes to the extinct of that animals, but also releases the biological diversity. Every year, people hunt a large number of rare animals to serve the personal purposes, therefore, the number of them decreases rapidly and becomes extinct. Moreover, the deforestation and the loss of the habitats of many other vital plants such as fruits, rice paddies to construct industrial companies that affect negatively to people’s life. People would loss the resources of fresh foods and the farmers might have the failure to keep the income from agriculture. Therefore, the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the important problems which could be solved as soon as possible.
On the other hand, there are more environmental problems we need to concern such as the polluted environment and the alteration of climate. Nowadays, the environmental pollution is a serious issue which need to be resolved immediately. There are many results of pollution such as the discharge of chemicals from factories into rivers or littering in public places. That not only leads to many diseases for people such as lung cancer and , but also has a negative impact on the habitats of animals and plants. In addition, the alteration of climate rises from greenhouse effect which could trigger off the disappearance of wild animals. Thus, people would find out the solution to tackle that problems presently.
In conclusion, besides the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals, the government should consider the other problematic things and give the suitable resolution to protect environment from harmful factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'denied'.
Suggestion: denied
...d about on. On the one hand, it is not deny that the number of plants and animals i...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ical diversity. Every year, people hunt a large number of rare animals to serve the personal purp...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eases for people such as lung cancer and , but also has a negative impact on the h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15503875969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82058516251 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49354005168 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7928897868 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6875 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285978871464 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088348673349 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844996530726 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195499632061 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752286116204 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.