You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am Alex Jhonson, avid reader of your weekly and recently saw your advertisement inviting applications for unpaid community services in developing nations. I am keen on joining your program and thereby sharing a few details related to my work experience and interests.
I am student at North Carolina University, my second semester is about to end in a couple of weeks, post which I will to dedicate my time for voluntary work. I am willing to spend my holidays this summer constructively, hence looking forward to contribute for social welfare. Additionally, I want to gain practical experience for the concepts I have learnt at the college on water restoration for irrigation purposes.
Being a bilingual, I am confident of conversing in Hindi. Besides the bilingual skill, I have prior background in handling assignments on water restoration with focus towards resolving issues associated with farming.
Considering the fact that I am well-versed in the language, I would prefer working in India. Additionally, the country is rain-fed, which further inclines me towards choosing the country for my intended activity. Assuming the time required for plantation and harvesting of crop, time span of 6 months will be sufficient.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Alex Jhonson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to my work experience and interests. I am student at North Carolina University...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to dedicate my time for voluntary work. I am willing to spend my holidays this su...
^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to contributing'.
Suggestion: to contributing
...r constructively, hence looking forward to contribute for social welfare. Additionally, I wan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, look, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42512077295 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1397472864 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8995793101 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5833333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776695944037 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029768932179 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236382216461 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414387736579 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251293379777 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.