Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our communities, there are several people who need helping by their young members for their work such as cooking, cleaning environments and so on.Their youngers should assist them, but they do not do that assisting them.
First of all, all young and some young adults are usually use their technological tools like cell phones and personal computers in this era and their parents too.For instance, young students always use their tablets or computers for their homework, because their teachers urge them for using that products.In some cities, there are much game places where children play game like Playstation places after their schoolworks.Students have to do homework much which given by their authors, so they have to consume their times with their learning and studying.Due to their not enough free time they do not interactions with their communities.
Also, helping any communities is a traditional, this approach was used before and i think this is as like as ritual.Modern countries always use robots and equipment where older people work or need helping.Because there are several options come from companies which could be used by their older members. These devices are more functional than younger people, because they could be programmable for their job, so they help effectively than other approaches.
In addition, helping places are everywhere in developed countries, and these type of places always relate communities necessities like cooking, cleaning whose needs these works.They always assist people who want.
In my opinion, taking account of all above reasons, i do not agree that young people do not help their community.So community should choose any other options for their landscapes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83909846778 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.462170591 48.9658058833 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.5 100.406767564 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.6045352989 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.45110844103 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215083733311 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11855983777 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726933176433 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135853627785 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068237163397 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 11.7677419355 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.