Prevention is better than cure. Out of country's highest budget, a large proportion should be directed from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.
Without adequate dispensation of budgets, country's funds will not be properly channelled. Some people argue that more funds should be allocated to curative medicine and health education, while others believe that more money should be spent rather on treatment . I am of the opinion that if more funds is diverted to preventive and health education measures , there will be declined incidence of mortality and enhanced productivity.
The death rate among citizens will reduce drastically , if budgets are properly allocated. More of a country's budget should be re-channelled to prevention of disease and health education than to treatment. For instance , spending more money on immunization which is a health strategy designed to prevent diseases and infection such as vaccines against oral polio, tuberculosis and hepatitis will prevent the frequency of the diseases occurrence. This will consequently reduce death rate associated with the intricacies of such diseases. Hence, when more funds are directed to health education and disease preventions , there will be significant national decline in mortality rate.
Moreover, there will be a boost in the country's economy. Productivity if a country will be improved if more money is used for the prevention of disease. Diseases and impairments most time contribute to a failing economy, therefore if more money is spent on disease preventions and health education rather than on treatment, complications of certain diseases such as amputations of limb, hepatitis, septicemia can be averted. This is because it decreases workforce leading to low productivity. Hence , if there are more healthy people in different sector of the country, it will therefore lead to an economic growth.
In conclusion, larger percentage of the country's budget should be allocated to preventive measures. This is because it leads to decrease mortality and subsequent economic growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07624680015 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3587055306 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299714966045 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122452157749 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115707574966 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208117836216 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375811065089 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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