The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.
The table compares the five highest ranking countries in terms of the numbers of visits and the
money spent by tourists over a period of two years.! !
It is clear that france was the world’s most popular tourist destination in the years 2012 and 2013.
However, the usa earned by far the most revenue from tourism over the same period.! !
In 2012, 83 million tourists visited france, and the usa was the second most visited country, with
66.7 million tourists. spain and china each received just under 58 million visitors, while italy was
ranked fifth with 46.4 million tourists. 2013 saw a rise of between 1 and 4 million tourist visits to
each country, with the exception of china, which received 2 million fewer visitors than in the
previous year.! !
Spending by tourists visiting the usa increased from $126.2 billion in 2012 to $139.6 billion in
2013, and these figures were well over twice as high as those for any other country. spain received
the second highest amounts of tourist revenue, rising from $56.3 billion to $60.4 billion, followed by
france, china and italy. Interestingly, despite falling numbers of tourists, Chinese revenue from
tourism rose by $1.7 billion in 2013.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spain
...d country, with 66.7 million tourists. spain and china each received just under 58 m...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...illion tourist visits to each country, with the exception of china, which received 2 million fewer v...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spain
...as high as those for any other country. spain received the second highest amounts of...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.035 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38251576553 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.45983205 43.030603864 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.833333333 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0166961601195 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124660568722 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183226545095 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00782584697499 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183833827568 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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