It is better for the college students to kive far away from home than live with their parents. Do yiu agree or disagree?
Many students are face the dilemma whether to live in a university dormitory or living at home with their parents. In my perspective, university dormitory is remunerative for the students.
According to the first school of thoughts, it is pertinent for the students to living with their family because they can fully concentrate on their studies because their parents are supporting them in their studies. Not only this, living in the home is free of cost than staying away from their house because other places are expensive to live so it can affect their financial budget also. Further, when the students face the difficulties so they seek help from their parents and the parents are trying to curb their perils. In addition to this while existing in the house they are able to doing other curricular activities.
On the other hand, university dormitory is the best place for the overall development of the students. The prime one is that, pupils are becoming self-reliant by doing their own work themself instead of taking help of others so this is a perfect way to develop the students. Furthermore, living in the campus side is also better to magnify their knowledge ,and they have easy access to libraries and various learning resources. Moreover, students are inculcate their communication skills by knowing the culture differences of the other nation and sharing the views of each other so its helpful for developing the overall personality of the students.
To concluded, after a lot of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that both living residence have their own benefits for the pupils but it is better for the students to live in a university dormitory in lieu of living with their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97569444444 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71297456664 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3887969181 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327955034351 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129849727275 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898147887186 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221247613705 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640469536171 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.