Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city centre. Public transportations like buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?
It is true that some cities have a law about banning private vehicles such as cars, trucks, motorcycles in some certain days, and suggest using public transportations like buses, taxis and metros instead. Personally, I believe this strategy has greater advantages than disadvantages .
On the one hand, I believe that this idea has a number of disadvantages. Firstly, using private transportations is less convenient compared to private vehicles. While personal vehicle allow people to go wherever and whenever they want , public transportations is limited with the schedule which means you might have to wait for long time to the next bus and train to come and people get off at the stops. Secondly, using public transportations might cause difficulty for delivery in the city. This might lead to the increase in the cost of delivery in the city centre.
On the other hand, this strategy has a lot of advantages. Firstly, it reduces some types of pollution. Since private vehicles are the main source of pollution such as carbon dioxide or annoying noise which does a huge damage to people’s health , using public transport enhances people’s health and prevent people from childhood asthma and early deaths by reducing the exposure of people to traffic. Secondly , it will solve the traffic congestion during a rush hour . For instance, because it is limited the number of vehicles, there will be more space to moving in the city. In addition, it also reduces the number of traffic accident.
To sum up, although the probhibition of private vehicles might has some drawbacks , I still believe that it is neccessary to promote a sequence of vehicle days and events to increase the appeal and awareness of its benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10247349823 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89296947764 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8981786329 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250001937797 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731668113288 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106023677533 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172293661903 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145764118465 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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