Today there is increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
Nowadays, the behaviour of the people has changed into worst behaviour due to the lack of understanding towards the moral values. So this essay shall analyse the rationales as well as plausible solution to curb this situation.
To begin with, bad behaviour and lack of respect are the major problem in the society. Firstly, in these days people have a hectic schedule so they do not have enough time to mingle up with others in the better behaviour. Not only this, due to the working routines the people are becoming stressed so this cause the lack if respect in their behaviour and then they are talking with the others they added the minus behave in their conversation which is a result of anti-social behaviour in the society.
In addition to this, living standard is also the major reason of this peril because there is many people who have enough wealth but their heart wants more and more money, which creates the lack of manners in the people. Further, parents have no extra time to inculcate the moral values in their wards and even most of the school are not conducting the moral education subject in the schools so the students have no information about it.
Every lock has its own key, similarly this problem have its solution. The prime one is that parents should spend the more time with their offsprings and teach the good manners them. Furthermore, governments should create awareness campaigns among the masses about the bad consequences of the anti-social behaviour so they become alert about it. Moreover, the schools should conduct a better classes to the students about the respectful manners and they should make some rules and regulation against the anti-social behaviour, by these action they have a fear in their mind so they do not adopt anti-social behave in their life.
To concluded, although there are various factors of the increasing anti-social behaviour in the society. So the mutual efforts of the society and authorities can adopt the alternative method for resolving this menace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96764705882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54172617965 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497058823529 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6031013388 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.923076923 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263437805178 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102313048078 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563407500766 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156565743898 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459551280837 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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