Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Big number of individuals wear high-end pieces of garment. The best designer companies around the world have enormous influence across the community. Additionally, they design clothes for celebrities, politicians, businessmen and other famous persons. In my opinion, nowadays everyone wants to be recognized by uniqueness of their style so they follow fashion trend and that is positive.
Firstly, all the serious professions today must follow a proper dress style. In order to dress pretty and nice someone must first design a produce proper clothes for you. Additionally, all high-end wardrobe looks unique and it can cost a fortune. Furthermore, it can be seen at highly successful persons in their public and private appearances. As a result, we have mass of followers that are ready to pay more just to wear pieces that are hardly reachable. People want to wear unique designs and feel special.
Definitely this industry is huge and operates very well. For example, production can involve thousands of individuals across the world from the design to final product and I think this is good as big number of people is employed. Moreover, it benefits community with a lot of choices they can choose to dress for different occasions. As a result, we have people that are well and proper dressed and they look gorgeous in their fashion garments.
To sum up, fashionable industry has brought lively colors to everyday life. Therefore, people can wear on the masterpieces of art and craftsmanship. As a result, people feel confident and happy when they look good. Additionally, they want to distinguish themselves from the others. On the other side, expansion of fashion industry brought jobs to many unemployed people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19784172662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84557839314 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8094321274 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0526315789 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138155310172 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422133343266 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041027203272 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855733582347 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448369572857 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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