More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Majority of individuals today are obsessed with wearing high-end pieces of the garment. The fashion industry is the strongest ever and number of its followers grow very rapidly. In addition, new stores are opening around the world and clothes can be even easily ordered online. People like to wear unique pieces of garments as they look modern and feel confident. In my opinion, downturns outweigh benefits because people spend more money and time in shopping.
Firstly, young people are being influenced by the advertisements they see across social media like Facebook, Instagram or Snapchat. Additionally, celebrities they follow wear the newest collections from the fashion houses. Young and old population immediately mirror themselves in the lovely collections that their role models wear. As a result, orders of new products are being made to look as modern as possible. Moreover, people feel confident when they are dressed modern and have a feeling that they are also important persons in the community.
On the other hand, many fashion addicts don't realize that they are just part of a big machine that they must constantly follow. Additionally, they spend a fortune on the garments that are overpriced, just because of the brand name. For example, the same cotton is used in the production of a Nike t-shirt and some unbranded, although Nike's one will cost more.
To sum up, it is very hard to resist the influence of media advertisements with showing off a new piece of clothing. People love feeling that gorgeous clothes cause. However, instead of spending money and time on things that are overpriced it would be better to invest resources somewhere else - for example, on education or journeys.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13261648746 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69628429131 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0829166635 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094165129641 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298361221593 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340243684688 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562354763313 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017750959147 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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