Q:- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people say that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money rather than trying to improve these situations.
According to what I learned in school or from other people, it's true a person sometimes tends to accept the situation no matter this kind of situation is what he wants or not. I think it might because of lazy. As we all know, most of people like to stay in one place for years, it will be quite hard for them to change their life environment. one of the most obvious reason is they are lazy, they do not want anything changed in their life, it's safer for them to keep everyday life the same. I genuine understand their heart, they like to settle down, that's their ways to do it.
On the other hand, there are always minorities do not accept the situation they're living in. So, they want to change or make the situation better, in order to get a better life. it is those people who make our life improved and technologies advanced. However, trying to make something better is difficult, even most of the time this action will end bad for those want a change. The first kind of people want a steady life for a reason, they want a normal life. but for those who are willing to take the risks, that is their way to build a better world.
I'm not saying it's wrong to accept a bad situation, but I do agree that it is better to make a difference. I'm the kind of person always want to try new things and I'd like to take the risks. In my humble opinion, I think human are more 'upgraded' than other species is because of we're always not satisfied, we always want to improve ourselves.
In the end, it depends on each individuals mind, everyone has their unique thought, those view are both right for the right person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... might because of lazy. As we all know, most of people like to stay in one place for years, it...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... them to change their life environment. one of the most obvious reason is they are ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... their heart, they like to settle down, thats their ways to do it. On the other ha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
... minorities do not accept the situation theyre living in. So, they want to change or m...
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Suggestion: It
... better, in order to get a better life. it is those people who make our life impro...
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Suggestion: But
... for a reason, they want a normal life. but for those who are willing to take the r...
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Suggestion: I'm
...s their way to build a better world. Im not saying its wrong to accept a bad si...
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Suggestion: I'm
...that it is better to make a difference. Im the kind of person always want to try n...
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Suggestion: I'd
...erson always want to try new things and Id like to take the risks. In my humble op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, i think, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33633633634 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29526495512 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510510510511 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.618760134 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199465476325 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711458854444 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113605314512 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157031079528 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171521701631 0.056905535591 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.