You recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed jobs
-Describe tour new job
-tellhim/her your other news
Dear Joseph,
I hope you will find this letter in the pink of your health. To counter your anger; let me tell you that finally I'll be there with you in your country in some days.
my plan to visit your country is ready and would rather be spending two months over there, out of the concern of my business, which would be around 20-25 days long. afterwards I'll be free and then will hang out with you.
I was just wondering about the things which I would have to carry with me. so I was just thinking if you could manage to send me the brief detail of the essentials, as I'm not familiar with the environment and people of London.
no doubt that it is a business trip, but how can I forget about our bet that we had in our college in which you lost, so now this is my reward that you would show me the city beautiful.
hope to see you soon,
yours lovingly,
veronica.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joseph, I hope you will find this letter in the ...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...our anger; let me tell you that finally Ill be there with you in your country in so...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...th you in your country in some days. my plan to visit your country is ready and...
^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Afterwards
... which would be around 20-25 days long. afterwards Ill be free and then will hang out wit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...d be around 20-25 days long. afterwards Ill be free and then will hang out with yo...
^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng. afterwards Ill be free and then will hang out with you. I was just wonderi...
^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... the brief detail of the essentials, as Im not familiar with the environment and p...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: No
...he environment and people of London. no doubt that it is a business trip, but h...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...ou would show me the city beautiful. hope to see you soon, yours lovingly, vero...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21176470588 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05714217059 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0380910619 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16136954619 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844071590134 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638139960366 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936629919535 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749498302185 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 70.7449484536 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.