rising universities fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects like philosophy amd history and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chacnes of employment to what extent do you agree or disagree
students invest a great deal of money in tertiary education therefore vocational subjects should not be baned in universities as they offer a better investment in terms of job opportunities so i wholeheartedly disagree with the statement and would delve my opinions in the upcoming paragraphs not everyone has interest in particular fields such as medicine engineering and science though they offer a good range of jobs but some folks found no interest in doing them however vocational subjects offer wide range of jobs opportunities in various aspects subjects like arts and philosophy provide valuable skills of learning individuals become active thinkers and are learns how to solve their problem rather than passive thinkers who just memorise the facts philosophy students become competitive and creative and are always ready to face obstacles no doubt jobs are less for them but after studying arts and philosophy they get prepare for every work they ability to examine and tackle the problem burgeon and analyse challenges no doubt studying science and medicine makes masses a well educated human but they should only be done if a individual has keen interest in it they should not learn these subjects for employment one must always remember that if one is capable of job he or she will get for instance in india there are many degrees of btech but students are not compatible for jobs they just clear the degree but have no interest and relevant knowledge for btech jobs there are multifarious folk who want to become philosopher or historian if universities ban their relevant subjects then how the world will have such high intellectual masses overall it can be extrapolated that employment is the major scenario in ones career everyone wants to have jobs but the person compatible for jobs only get employment one should always not study for jobs but for the sake of ones dream and passion
- rising universities fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects like philosophy amd history and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chacnes of employment to w 56
- rising universities fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects like philosophy amd history and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chacnes of employment to w 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in particular, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01582278481 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68429615393 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 316.0 20.2975951904 1557% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1585.0 106.682146367 1486% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 316.0 20.7667163134 1522% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 91.0 7.06120827912 1289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196115043221 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196115043221 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196115043221 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 160.2 13.0946893788 1223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -249.26 50.2224549098 -496% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 126.5 11.3001002004 1119% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.51 8.58950901804 262% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 128.4 10.1190380762 1269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 127.0 10.7795591182 1178% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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