Most of the people think that the government should spend more money on exploring the outer space, while some think that it is a waste of public fund. discuss both the views and give your own opinions.
The outer space is another crucial part of knowing the unknowns. Recently, India, China, America, and Russia launched different projects for going to space and spend a lot of money on making of aerospace rockets. The spectacular thing is that; people are aware and excited for some undefined matters which is finding out by the aeronautical agencies alike NASA and ISERO. Nowadays, people want to acknowledge <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="acknowledge "></span>other planets and galaxies, they get conscious and curious for defining out the unknown pleasures of the universe. People want the clues and information accurately of unauthorized theories such as the discovery of black hole from dissimilar sources like newspaper and televisions, and their expectations increase day by day for gaining more knowledge about the extragalactic nebulae. For this, most of the people support the decision of the government for outlying the money over the preparation of exploring the galaxy.
However, some people argue that; lending deposits on these contrive is only a waste of public funds. The fact and figures show already the dimensions of public mentality, but the main content is a large number of citizens want the explanation of happenings of the outer world. From all of this merely; few amounts of people are not interested in the ascertaining of unsimilar cosmos because they have other needs and requirements from the regime. So they create a focus of government onto certain issues and affairs by expressing the disagreement for the new creations.
At last, I conclude that; the government is responsible for providing and issuing the funds to the public, and for helping the authorities to uncover the hidden truths of the globe. The government has to be<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="government "></span> able to organize themselves for availing and fulfilling the demands of both public and authority to produce a balance between spending money on necessary affairs without disappointing anyone parity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...blic mentality, but the main content is a large number of citizens want the explanation of happen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63782051282 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02638482227 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0454435162 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.583333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173513379244 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066056318349 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384147519562 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114465167108 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00955455291961 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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