Uk graduates and postgraduates students who did not go to full-time work after leaving college in 2008.
The graph compares information about the various destinations of the graduate and postgraduate pupils in uk, excluding full-time work in the year 2008.
In an overview, it can be noticed that multitude of both graduate and postgraduate students choosed further study as their destination as compared to other paths whereas one-third of them remained unemployed.
As can be depicted from the first graph that out of total graduates who didnot went for full time job, 17,735 students were engaged in part-time work, whereas 3,500 sought for volunterring, 29,665 of them headed for further study and the remaining 16,235 were unemployed, which is roughly almost the same amount as those who were engaged in part time job.
On the second graph, we see that 2,535 uk postgraduates did part time work while only 345 did voluntary work, 2,725 students decided to study furtger which is slightly more that students who decided to take part time employment. Similarly, 1,625 students were unemployed after leaving college in 2008.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... of total graduates who didnot went for full time job, 17,735 students were engaged in pa...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ame amount as those who were engaged in part time job. On the second graph, we see th...
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Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... we see that 2,535 uk postgraduates did part time work while only 345 did voluntary work,...
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Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... more that students who decided to take part time employment. Similarly, 1,625 students w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, similarly, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23636363636 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69219188643 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4010706577 43.030603864 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.8 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424999104281 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228990244815 0.103423049105 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867379068706 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245731454638 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128040371608 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.