Line graph : global water use by sector.
Table : water consumption in brazil in Congo in 2000.
The figures illustrate the number of global water utilisation by sector in a hundred and the amount of water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable upsurge occurred for the use of water for agriculture and overall, it is able to be seen that the population, irrigated land and water consumption per person of Brazil are higher rather than Democratic Republic of Congo.
To begin with, 1900 to 2000 witnessed a tremendous upsurge for the utilisation of water for agriculture field in which it, initially, stood at well below 1000 and peaked approximately at 30000 in 10 in 2000. In contrast, the amount of water use for industrial use and domestic use remained stable over the first 50 years, and it uplifted dramatically, soaring to just over 1000 for industrial use and well under 1000 for domestic use.
In accordance with bar chart, the population, irrigated land, water consumption per person of democratic republic Congo, which was at 5.2 million, 100 km and 8 m respectively, is lower rather than Brazil, which made up at 176 million, 26.500 km and 359 respectively.
- The range of technology is increasing the gap between the poor and the rich, do you agree or disagree? 25
- International travel is becoming cheaper, and more and more countries open their door and with more and more tourists.Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages? 73
- Line graph Consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers 95
- In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. Why are these changes happening? Do you think these changes are positive and negative? 56
- some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.921875 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88877568471 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5692879031 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.0 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366591347307 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233345557839 0.103423049105 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157970241536 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25695132543 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153669293467 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.2329268293 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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