Leaders and directors in an organization are frequently older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Adults used to be commanders and chiefs rather than inexperienced people, nevertheless, numerous persons believe that it would be better if the leaders were a younger person. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, I do appreciate to the assumption which considered that the younger individuals should be a chief instead of adults. Moreover, they firmly assume that it is going to create a new idea which is different to the idea that had been created by older people. Nonetheless, I tend to oppose and strongly agree to the other statement which thought that it is going to be better for adults to be commanders and chiefs since the youth used to have a tribulation of the lack of the experiences in comparison with the older one.
According to my perspective, there are two contributing factors of the argument above. It, first and foremost, caused by the number of experiences which older people had, regarding this, I do believe that these experiences are going to produce more fruitful outcomes in the end. Second but not less crucial, it is apparent that the inexperienced people still have to learn everything from the experienced persons in order to make them having an improved skill.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the assumption of selecting the younger individuals to be a leader is inappropriate to be done due to the fact that they are not capable of organising various things as excellent as older people. Thus, it will be better for the inexperienced people to learn numerous positive experiences from the older one first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, still, thus, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93706293706 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90698047439 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6600434267 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229267705729 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852766932591 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646236944961 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140227950247 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480027634559 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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