nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online.However,many people prefer the traditional classroom training or study.discuss the advantages and dis advantages of both methods.
With the advent of internet and other technological aides,many universities and institutions offer their courses online.However some people are still backing the conventional way of education in classrooms.This essay will discuss some pros and cons of both online and classical methods of education.
It is undeniable that online education has introduced many benefits for all types of learners.Under graduates for example can recruit to any course the want at any university which was not available in the past as a result online education proved to have a great variability and availability.Additionally,postgraduates also have benefited from online education because it saves their time and effort as many of them work in different jobs after graduation.However,the negative aspects of online education can not be overlooked.Many of recruiters do not complete their studies because they become bored and lenient due to the lack of face to face interactions.Finally,online education has turned to be a profitable industry rather than a mean of education. It i so difficult now for students to determine what are the contents of a certain online course?Or what is the ultimate benefits that they will obtain from taking this course?
on contrast,traditional way of education in classrooms still has its supporters.Some students for instance are comfortable and their acquisition is enormously better in classroom because they have the ability to interact positively with their siblings and even ask their teachers about their curious questions.Moreover,some people fell commitment and responsibility when they are involved in a group course because they are encouraged and motivated by competition with each other.despite the previous advantages of traditional education,it may be inconvenient for people who are working because it requires to assign some time for it.Lastly,conventional education is more expensive than online as students should attend at the place of education which needs expenditures for transport and accommodation in case of abroad students.
To conclude,both online and classic education have their negative and positive features.So, it is highly dependent on the students preferences and circumstances in choosing which educational approach will suit them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78106508876 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.20626411678 2.80592935109 150% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559171597633 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 279.697264913 49.4020404114 566% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 390.8 106.682146367 366% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.6 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238297678775 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12799878388 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430748923811 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145382993359 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315989501214 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.91 50.2224549098 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.44779559118 297% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.0 11.3001002004 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.43 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.72 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 35.0 9.78957915832 358% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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