some people think that the development of technology help to decrease crime and other people think that would encourage crime to discuss both views and give your opinion
Technological development is taking place rapidly these days. Some would have argued developing these reduce the percentage of criminal acts. While on the other group of people put their argument by saying that instead of lowering crime rates these advancements in technology will make the criminal activities more higher I believe these developing tendency in technology has contributed a lot for the decrease of criminal activities.
To begin with, a number of cyber crimes are rapidly taking place due to the invention and implementation of technological items. By using the hidden cameras, individuals these days capturing the private moment of others. The perpetrator who does so tend so is found to be blackmailing by threatening to explore the privacy of them which are often shameful to see such as sexual intimacy. Therefore, the criminal continuously enforces the innocent person to do in terms of their interest like victims are being compelled to give money. That is the reason why it has been seen that crimes are happening with the support of the technologies. However, it is undenied that installments of these technologies have created terror among the criminal to involve more in such activities such as CCTV Camera on roads or shops.
On the other hand, because of the installments of these items, many criminal minds think the outcome a thousand times before attempting to harm others. Since the cameras can easily capture the moment where they are doing robbery or murder in the places. For instance, in Australia, nearly 45% robbery in public places has been reduced, after putting the installments of the cameras, and the suffer seem to have less complaining about that in the past. Thus the technologies have proved that they are actually contributing to reducing the crimes because of their smartest features.
In conclusion, these inventions have found to be more effective to reduce the crime rates, because of its effectiveness to create a terror among of the criminal minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...ology will make the criminal activities more higher I believe these developing tendency in ...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ng the installments of the cameras, and the suffer seem to have less complaining about tha...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ess complaining about that in the past. Thus the technologies have proved that they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17846153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86963288582 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.50772026 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16967310824 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561522128106 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05014916455 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098755139093 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586170685284 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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