Some psychologist recommend that it is important to overcome stress by spending time do nothing to what extend do you agree or disagree?
Few of psychologists suggested that it’s very essential to release your stress by doing nothing. In my opinion, while I agree that people should spend some time at their home with friends and family to reducing their stress.
Firstly, stress is the most dangerous and widely spread disease was found over the last decades. Moreover, small number of people holds the opinion that hard-working brings you reach at a peak while other think to set daily routine for all the things, Moreover, mostly people get rid by their work to finish as soon as possible, and start another work to demonstrate their productivity in office or strive to attain something, meanwhile a kind of people has always aggressive attitude by virtue of work over load that eventually deteriorating their health and personal lives.
However, on this situation people ought to go for the rest and spend some time to releasing their stress by doing so many things such as, holidays with family, visit relative’s houses, sports with colleagues and so many other things as desire. In addition, an employee is asset of the organization which plays a vital role among the organization hence employees must be catered by their managers.
In conclusion, people ought to do social activities that is the dire necessity of any human being as well as consider on health, these measures can counteract the causes of stress.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-05-11 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69596543114 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65367965368 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.321997988 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.0 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5714285714 5.23603664747 355% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163313464591 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838900669223 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636689570514 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112974909708 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777392715288 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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