Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
More women are venturing into fields previously considered masculine. Some individuals believe that number of both genders must be enrolled by colleges for every courses. this essay will argue against the opinion.
While lot of feminist groups are advocating for increase in the level of women's participation in almost every field, the choice of the prospective student is paramount in determining the subjects to be taken in school. it is possible that universities insist on equal number of both male and female for all courses, but students, irrespective of gender, cannot be forced.
Another important factor that need consideration in choosing courses, is the intending undergraduate's intellectual abilities. Without doubt, mental capacity to understand is more important than gender. Evidently, a student admitted, just for the sole reason of being either male or female, not minding his or her intellect, may not do well in such instance. Therefore, it means that faculties should permit scholars to take disciplines they have intellectual capacities for.
Summing up, some people opined that universities should make sure they admit equal number of both boys and girls for all fields. This essay discussed why I completely disagree, because individual's choices and intellectual abilities are more relevant considerations. Apparently, enrolling students based on gender alone may result in them not doing so well.
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- The charts below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls, in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? 84
- With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, may, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00842961883 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695852534562 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.874825905 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198362320121 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598040435967 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559701465674 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115888258416 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565986665434 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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