Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently, the issue of climate change has become highly controversial. There are those who argue that all countries should be equally responsible when it comes to combating climate change, while others believe that developed countries have a greater responsibility than developing countries. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my overall opinion at the end, which is that climate change is a responsibility for every country.
Generally, there are two main reasons why people believe that every country has a responsibility to prevent climate change. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favor of this idea is because the problem of climate change is unable to be solved by only a few participating countries. This is because it is a universal, global problem. Therefore, any solution to it will need to be on a global scale, too. A further point in favor of this argument is that because developing countries do not have as much technology and fund to cope with environmental problems compared to developed countries. Every country should therefore have responsibility.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that developed countries have a bigger responsibility in combating climate change. The main reason is that developed countries are blamed for environmental pollution because they were able to develop through industrialization at the cost of environmental problems. Additionally, they have the responsibility to set the example, so introducing policy changes will encourage other nations to do the same. If they are interested in environmental pollution, developing countries will also be careful.
In conclusion, this is a topic that is relevant to modern society. I believe that, all things considered, all countries should equally bear responsibility of environmental problems. If all nations tried to improve the environment problems in the world, it will certainly bring about better results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51132686084 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30680048724 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7160398301 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471394367043 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153771316749 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130213073812 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300838040337 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104334482663 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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