Interner has emerged as a new source of information and knowlrdge. This led many people to think that this new technology will ultimately replace book and printed words
How far do you agree with the statememt?
In this mordern world the internet has transformed the way we gather information.This world wide web which comes up with the uniwue option for collecting data and facts.Many people think that this would largely restore bookd and newspaper.Althoigh these printed documents and books has distinct advantages, the internet will always rules the world with the real time information.This essay will discuss how the the internet provides information in distinct manner.
Books gives us geniune information.Printed documenys are always issued after their authenticity of the information is verified.This makes people to gain valid facts about their search.It, however, cannot be carrief everywhere, so acquiring information becomes difficult.For instance, I couldnot able to access the updated information of the train schedule from my home. Hence, it is obvious that printed documents cannot gives us real time time data.
Alternatively, internet is the network of wide range of i formation and knowledge. It ca be accessed with a instant click and it makes the user more friendly and connected throughout. Moreover, it not only provide us the information but also updates it regularly. For example, Wikipedia, google and other web sources provides us the valuable information beyond our knowledge. Therefore, internet is the best way for finding information and gathering knowledge.
To sum up, internet cantains rich source of facts. This essay discussed how the internet help people to expand the knowledge and collect data despite the advantages with the printed documents. It is evident that the books will be overruled by the internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55378486056 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17907816693 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 130.472124251 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178735895918 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613889905356 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484944281838 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113344416814 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044738139212 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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