Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is an ascending amount of families desiring their offspring to attend a private school. it is a matter of fact that necessary annual academy payments being paid to private schools by parents is constituted on unrestricted pupil's alternatives concerning their own preferences where to be taught and possibilities to pay for that. however, it is claimed that elementary science comprehends in private school should furnish freedom from government gathering.
Personally, I wholeheartedly accord with the persuasion that however expensive, education disbursement is not a ground to elude taxes.
To begin with, private schools have changed the educational standards and enlarge choice of pedagogical programmes. To illustrate, the private schools are constructed so that not only to advance mental potentials but also propose hobbies clubs to amuse rather than train. Hence, the private school business should be considered and treated like others as it offers an enormous number of services. Further emphasizing on my point of view, the ultimate outcome of taxes distribution supports all life areas including education. As a consequence, all sort of cess develop education availability due to got finance are distributed to country schools.
On the contrary, private school payments have been recognized by experts as being artificially high. To elaborate, parents have to purchase separate courses organized by school tutors, which can be not worthwhile quality. Thus, in some cases, school payments do include a considerable share of the unnecessary component.
To recapitulate, it can be stated that private schools have established too heavy payment for their students, but taxes are surely gathered for education availability to rise in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, sort of, in some cases, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70786516854 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10672746315 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2346906034 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270081840761 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910139546864 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403572374452 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138008594016 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463707683466 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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