Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week.
Do you agree?
It is a fact that an insufficient amount of physical exercises in a new lifestyle made people unhealthy. The idea of compulsory sports activities on every week in schools and colleges is a good initiative to build a healthy society to some extent. In my opinion, early awareness of the importance of health will make sure the practice continued in their lifetime, that will assure transferring the importance to next generation as well.
There are many benefits for students engaging in any sports activities. The best time to start any physical activities is at school. Because that is the age where pupils start growing, and the effects of junk food and inadequate body exercises shown " prevention is better than cure", we will be able to build a healthy society if we start doing physical activities at an early stage. Moreover, students tend to avoid outdoor games, they prefer to play video games than outdoor games in this age. If students get on well with a life practice in early stage, they are likely to continue that in their whole life. So, schools and colleges should plan physical training hours every week.
The other benefit is the chances of persuading others to do exercise every day. For example, some parents and family members may not be literate to understand the effects of increasing weight. If there is a person to motivate others to participate in some of the activities, people can control a large extent of health issues.
In conclusion, educational institutes should arrange physical training hours to create a healthy generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...on to motivate others to participate in some of the activities, people can control a large ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03053435115 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73368786735 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4206924228 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202974995414 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657318834269 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460324192006 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980373574109 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598116314857 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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