You recently became a member of your local leisure centre but you are unhappy with the services and facilities.
Write a letter to the Centre Manager. In your letter:
• explain the circumstances
• say why you are dissatisfied
• what action you would like the leisure centre to take
Dear Centre Manager,
I am Sudhan Kumar from Adambakkam. Recently, I took membership of the leisure centre. I am writing this letter as I am dissatisfied with the services and amenities offered.
First of all, the couches are in very bad shape. They need to be repaired immediately to avoid accidents rather than let us sit precariously. Secondly, garbage collection from our houses, as initiated by the centre has disrupted. This has potential health hazards for the entire community.
I request that you take an action on priority to service the seats. It is also essential that the waste management is restored.
Look forward to receiving your prompt support.
Yours faithfully,
Sudhan Kumar C
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-13 | ATTENBOROUGH | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 600.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 114.0 206.0 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89803108675 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.780701754386 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.0810845868 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.5454545455 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.3636363636 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195693506332 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560922864803 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569592540822 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959199256451 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048765413777 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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