The government should make people take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree?
It is always a debatable question that whether it is government responsibility to take care of the environment or individual as well. According to my opinion its responsibility of both government and individuals to maintain the environment. Reasons for my inclination are articulated in trailed paragraphs.
To commence with, nowadays world is suffering from many burning issue and environmental problem is one of them, hence to handle this situation individual have to show their intelligence buy avoiding uses of plastic products because according to the survey of Time Magazine plastic is one of the major reason for soil contamination as plastic take 2 million years to take degrade completely. In addition to this, people have to for the 3R procedure “Reduce, Reuse and Recycle” to maintain the fertility of the soil and make soil become more productive. Moreover, people prefer to read e-newspaper as it is more convenient so less paper produces more tree saved.
Although, the government also have to take some strict action to maintain the environment. For that, they have to put some penalty if anyone found guilty while cutting down the trees or use plastic bags. Secondly, the authority has to start a campaign to aware people about the consequence or harm of the environment problem. For example, the government of Bali they have started a campaign to maintain cleanliness on their beaches, as a result, they attract more tourist and earn a lot of money in the form of foreign exchange.
In conclusion, It is not the individual's responsibility to preserve the velocity of the environment so both administer authority and people both have to put their effort to conserve the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...ividual have to show their intelligence buy avoiding uses of plastic products becau...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...less paper produces more tree saved. Although, the government also have to take some ...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...change. In conclusion, It is not the individuals responsibility to preserve the velocity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20216606498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14339076868 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.239187046 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243209737517 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940173387467 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506475996233 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148224887038 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208472314504 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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