The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The figure elucidates the percentage of monthly household revenue several European nations spend on several aspects. at first glance, it is evident that Germany has a dominant percentage in clothing and entertainment.
To begin with food and drink, turkey has the highest percentage, which made up at 36 in 100, in comparison with France, Germany, the UK and Spain, which constituted at a quarter, two times of 11%, 27 in 100 and just above three-tenths respectively. In accordance with housing, the UK becomes a dominant country, which was at a half of 74%, rather than France, Germany, turkey and Spain, which accounted for just below 35%.
In contrast, the percentage of Germany in clothing and entertainment is higher instead of other states. In regard to that, Germany made up at a half of 30% for clothing and just under a fifth for entertainment in which other countries solely achieved at just below 15 in 100 for these two aspects.
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- Writing Task 2 (an essay)Some practical skills such as money management should be taught in high school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and real life examples. 73
- Line graph : movie ticket sales by genre (1980 – 2010). 72
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...opean nations spend on several aspects. at first glance, it is evident that German...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ment is higher instead of other states. In regard to that, Germany made up at a ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in contrast, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95597484277 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8982589717 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2609435967 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123333114463 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693132926676 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465612266591 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094886277846 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649842558117 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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