people spend their most of the time doing enjoyments rather than things they should do
In the modern era, people have a busy schedule. So, people can get less chance to enjoy their life. Although other people believe that people spend their most of time in enjoyment than doing things which are significant to do, I hold the opinion that people are very busy to set up their life. They hardly get time to do enjoyment. Young people have many responsibilities and burden, they are stuck into routine life's activities. I feel this way due to a few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays, the biggest crisis is finding a good job for people. So, people always do work to become skillful in order to find a high earning job. In the competitive world, it is difficult to stay in the race of a job, because, some people have not enough money to fulfill their basic needs. For example, youngsters do the job in restaurants, cafeterias, and the hotel to earn some extra money. They do overtime jobs to earn extra money which can be used in their further education.
Secondly, in the advanced technological world, it is very hard to do study. The education becomes very complex. Students face conflicts in their education since there are many tasks they have to do in university. Moreover, students have made efforts to get admission in college since there are limited sits in a particular field. For instance, when wanted to get admission in DDS, I had to wait for three years due to many competition among the international students. I had passed two years to improve my resume. It was a hard time for me. Therefore, I think that people have to do many things in their lives besides enjoyment.
Finally, there are some people who waste their time by doing activities they like. They do not care about their education and study. To illustrates, many youngsters are nor regular in their job as well in college. They spend most of their time doing parties or on social media. Furthermore, some people waste their time to do enjoy with friends. They do not know their duty about their families and communities. However, I am of the opinion that there are very few people who are irresponsible. Generally, people know their important work and do not waste their time in extra activities.
By the way of conclusion, based on the above-mentioned arguments, I think that people know their duty, and they do not have time to enjoy other things because of the tough education and difficulties to find jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7365967366 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63349830585 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4662004662 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7011894639 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5714285714 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3214285714 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51267784729 0.236089414692 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156001881518 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140468981904 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309561488126 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134951685313 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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