City council is planning to pull down one of the historical buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it.
Write a letter to the city council and in your letter mention the below,
What is the importance of the building?
Why should it be renovated?
Suggest ways to raise funds and maintain the building in future.
Respected Sir,
Good Day. I am writing this letter to your kind notice on behalf of the residents of Porur area, inorder to highlight some valuable information related to one of the ancient buildings in our locality “The Local Porur Library”. We hereby express our dissatisfaction towards the city council’s plan of demolishing this old library premises. This library plays a vital role with the life’s of students for their educational use and for residents who carries reading books as their hobby. Moreover this facility is existing for a prolong period of time in this area by enabling the public to rely upon it for all their intellectual requirements. Therefore inorder to avail this benefit for a longer run we recommend and request to restore this information center.
We wanted to update you that, all the residents of this locality is keen in retaining this book center for current as well as future generation. Because of this motto, majority of the population is willing to contribute some amount of money as per their capabilities and to collect donations from corporates, gated communities and industries which are placed out nearby – which will result in generation of a lump sum amount for reconditioning this library facility. Also the public has even extended their acceptance for an increase in the rates of Library membership charges – so that monthly maintenance of this premises becomes easily manageable.
Requesting you to consider our apprehension and support us with approvals to retain this earliest library facility in our locality.
Thanking you!
Your’s Faithfully,
Shakthi Priya
People Coordinator
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...o carries reading books as their hobby. Moreover this facility is existing for a prolong...
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Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Moreover this facility is existing for a prolong period of time in this area by enabling...
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Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...this facility is existing for a prolong period of time in this area by enabling the public to ...
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Line 2, column 663, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...or all their intellectual requirements. Therefore inorder to avail this benefit for a lon...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r reconditioning this library facility. Also the public has even extended their acce...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...harges – so that monthly maintenance of this premises becomes easily manageable. Re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40458015267 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0265731606 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3808604192 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0605238084202 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265473681235 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432460402191 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478034250753 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448713589944 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 8.37731958763 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 7.59969072165 140% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 41.2886597938 235% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.