City council is planning to pull down one of the historical buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it.
Write a letter to the city council and in your letter mention the below,
What is the importance of the building?
Why should it be renovated?
Suggest ways to raise funds and maintain the building in future.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirit. I am writing to you to express my concern regarding your plan of pulling down the Hall of Refuge.
Historical landmarks like the Hall of Refuge is not only holding a part of this town's history but is also making it attractive to tourists. With this being said, this infrastructure has brought a lot of investments and job posts for newly opened facilities. Located at the centre of the town, its accessibility make it a choice for people and visitors from other places.
We are all well aware that funding a renovation for this building may be costly but we can come up with a couple of activities. I have local bands in mind that can perform for a free concert which can be held at the park just across the centre. Additionally, we can organize fun runs, wherein all the proceeds will go to the funds for the reconstruction of the Hall of Refuge.
If you are open to any of these suggestions, I know a lot of people that are willing to volunteer to make these activities possible. You can reach me at 713-842-1651 so that we can agree for a scheduled meeting.
Looking to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Joyce Smith
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| 2019-05-16 | mleopoldo | 87 | view |
| 2019-05-16 | Sakthi Priya | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towns'' or 'town's'?
Suggestion: towns'; town's
...fuge is not only holding a part of this towns history but is also making it attractiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54587155963 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69301999695 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7252373111 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100909322157 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393612623998 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392502445288 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047503980618 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499952190336 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.