On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
• describe the item you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my Giordano watch last week, during my trip to Mumbai.
It was an expensive Giordano watch, with the batch-id GEO76234X. It was a digital watch and had a blue strap with a grey dial.
During my tour to Santacruz Mumbai, I went to have breakfast in “The Grand Mumbai” restaurant on a bright Friday morning. I removed my watch and placed it on the table. To pick my order, I left my table unattended for few minutes, and when I returned I could not find my watch there.
I have got my watch 100 percent insured from your company and is still under coverage. I would request you to initiate the insurance process, so that I can recover my loss. Please let me know what all documents you would require so that the I can get the sum insured as soon as possible.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Xia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...all documents you would require so that the I can get the sum insured as soon as poss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53939393939 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47398957679 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0197110966 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0909090909 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166847305981 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659928499168 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618318461333 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977012699354 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787785944235 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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