Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Travelling is very remarkable in everyone’s life since it helps people to experience new culture, weather, and food. But how good it is when there is someone with you who you can enjoy with. Personally, I believe that it is better to have someone who can accompany you during your travel. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, having a friend on a tour can reduce the fear of lonliness, which is useful when we are in need. To be more specific, trips have lots of challenges: we enter to a new world with different people and different locations. It is likely that we face to some problems such as getting lost or having an accident, so when there is a companion, he/she can assist to get out of challenges and solve some problems. My brother’s experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, my brother and his school friend went to a summer camp in Hong Kong to do some volunteering. Two days after their arrival, my brother had an accident with a car. He was very worried because he didn’t know anything about hospitals and emergencies of Hong Kong. However, his friend assisted him to get to the nearest hospital. As a result, his doctor told that he arrived on time and there is no worries.
Secondly, being with a companion on a tour helps to have a wonderful time, which is very good for health. Despite it is good to spend some time alone on a trip in order to relax, spending time with a friend is more advantageous than being alone. Travelling is not only about getting out of country and being with yourself, but it is about enjoying and having fun. Moreover, doctors consider travelling and having joy for good health. For instance, when I was at eleventh grade, I felt very depressed because of examinations. When I went to doctor, he told me to spend some time with friends on a tour. Hence, I decided to pack my clothes and move to Bursa, Turkey with my classmate. I can’t expressing how wonderful the trip was. When I came back, I was feeling relaxed and there was no sign of depression in me. I wouldn’t have felt that much great if there was no companion with me.
To put it in a nutshell, I am of the opinion that having a partner during a travel is beneficial. This is because it is good for emergency cases, and because it can help to have exciting and unforgettable moments far from anxiety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 890, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no worries'?
Suggestion: there are no worries
...doctor told that he arrived on time and there is no worries. Secondly, being with a companion on...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...he opinion that having a partner during a travel is beneficial. This is because it is go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5125284738 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69972316076 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498861047836 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3594550358 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.24 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.56 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175150668198 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487639310131 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388539507242 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109109043323 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544434037359 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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