Some parents buy btheir children a large number of toys to play with.
what are the advantages and disadnantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
As parents love their children, they can do anything to see them cheerful. Some parents buy too much playing stuff to make them pleased. Children will definitely enjoy having a large collection of toys, but there are also drawbacks of this trend to be taken into account.
On the one hand, there are many advantages for children to have a variety of playing things. Firstly, parents nowadays think that their child should have toys that help them with learning. Moreover, with the advent of technology, many toys have now learning materials built-in them. For example, pianos or stuff toys play music in which there are alphabets, poems or vocabulary being inserted, which help a child in memorizing more conveniently. Secondly, playing toys with their peer constantly boost their communication skills, which is a necessary tool for a child to build up their confidence.
On the other hand, one problem is that the child becomes anti-social, as he is continuously involved in playing indoor, while outdoor activities are necessary to get socialize. Furthermore, going out aids a child to develop many skills like how to deal with people of different nature and many other problem solving and logical skills. Another issue is that, as a child gets every toy whichever is demanded, he loses the value of the others that he already has and, in this way, he does not value things and money. In addition, this behavior leads a child to become stubborn.
In conclusion, while it is a benefit for the child to have a variety of playing things, it can also make a child arrogant ultimately discontented to whatever he has.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Children will definitely enjoy having a large collection of toys, but there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9706959707 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66404895065 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0839280019 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315002003193 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110574220924 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532333749256 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172101367435 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076668262618 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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