In recent years, there has been a vast increase in the number of cars on the roads. In turn, it leads some people to hold the view that they are affecting our urban areas.
In recent years, there has been a vast increase in the number of cars on the roads. In turn, it leads some people to hold the view that they are affecting our urban areas.
In my opinion, one positive side of being numerous cars on the roads is that it provides individuals with efficiently and comfortable conditions when they have to move their destinations such as work office, shopping, study and others. It would be the best choice when people faced up poor public transportations.
On the other hand, I strongly feel that, increasing the numbers of cars cause to worse the environment of the cities and towns. Since they emit harmful and toxic gases, people suffer some dangerous health problems which are related to respiratory diseases. Furthermore, as a result of building some roads for rising numbers of cars are the reason for cutting greenery and trees.
Another negative point of being too many cars on the roads is that the roads become more dangerous because of serious road accidents which are carried out by drivers. Pedestrians and cyclists have less and less space to move safely to their distances. For example, it is difficult for schoolchildren to cross the road when there is huge traffic.
Taking everything into consideration, although our contemporary urban areas are getting full with so many cars, I support the idea that this trend should be taken to reduce accounting the impact on atmosphere of towns and the safety of people who are inhabiting in these places.
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- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at they are affecting our urban areas. In my opinion, one positive side of being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9209486166 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68129311156 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5700953656 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354264429571 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147978312844 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208114382304 0.0667982634062 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261949100572 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.372634384872 0.056905535591 655% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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