Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back bullies.
Discuss this view and give your opinion.
Now days violence, as a concept is increasing in our society and our most vital part of it, children, are influenced by this despite the role of parents on eliminating this phenomenon.
Firstly, the unlimited and not strictly is a major reason of bad attitudes mostly at teenagers. Social media like facebook, twitter, instagram are creating different models, usually not educational and inspiring for this part of society, which is projecting the future. The extreme example is a teenager girl from Indonesia that make a question in her personal instragram account if she should die or not, because she was very upset from her life and the result of the poll was 70 % confirm.
Secondly, we are living on a very competitive society. This competition brings even bad aspects like intimidating, no fair play, attacking feelings etc instead of winning a debate or a particular case. Teens are pushing by many factors to do well in school, to get high grades, to be prepared for work trade, that is not always fair or equally for everyone.
However family, especially parents, have difficult mission on reducing the amount of bullies among the children. Teaching on how a teen should do or speak in front of bullies is crucial to lose that impact on their personality. Human behaviour is very sensitive on that age and more should be done from educational system too.
In conclusion our global society have increase a lot verbal violence, but we as a parent or adults should lead the younger generation towards good values and integrity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94594594595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74826195749 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656370656371 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9640535079 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104831613364 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034492335967 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313179127664 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579284865066 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323439583993 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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