age when getting married by the group
The bar chart illustrates the age when getting married by the group from 1996 to 2008. At first glance was evident that, the age that both sexes got married was higher in 2008; while female to marry at a younger age than male.
In 1996, 1% of female got married between the age of 16 and 19; while in 2008 this figure was about three times lower. On the other hand, no male in this group got married in either year. The most age for female to got married was from 25-29 years of age, at around 11.5 percent in both years.
As for female, the age groups of 25-29 and 30-34 was the most age to got married, with about 9 percent of male. However, by 2006, male got married between 25 and 29 had falled to 8 percent, while 11 percent of male now got married between the ages of 30 and 34. 35-39 and 40-44 the age group showed a similar trend. The percentage of female in these groups went up slightly, while for male rose dramatically. The 35-39 of male increase from 7 percent to 9 percent and the older group went from 5 percent to 7 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17326732673 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02317835637 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0444290368 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376337310292 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183971714091 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129530261016 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298726111865 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107374367055 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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