people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying in their career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that the individuals who established their permanent working career in early age are provided further satisfaction in their work compared to the employers regularly altering their workplace. However, I believe that the people who tend to change their position have multiple opportunities in the organizations in terms of financial support and facilities.
The most obvious advantage belongs to the people who prefer to change frequently their work to others, they are affordable to earn much more money depending on their work. Admittedly, the main purpose of working is to achieve huge amount of money rather than to build future career. By receiving higher salary, there is natural contentment for their jobs. Thus, unless the financial state of people is adequately in the workplace, they are not satisfied their works regardless how many years they work in these place.
Furthermore, in contemporary society, current people crave to work in the places which have variety of facilities and conditions. For this reason, most employees try to find themselves in comfortable workplace than old ones in order to experience feelings of satisfaction. Further opportunities such as transportation, healthcare, travel and others which are provided by companies led people to satisfy their employers. It would seem that job hoppers can obtain exaltation in working.
Notwithstanding, numerous people opt a job early and keep it in order to reap pleasure. Because they appreciate their working experiences which accumulated during the years. These experiences assist them to progress their career and receive a high salary.
Taking everything into consideration, some support the view about people making an early choice of permanent career in order to take pleasant on their work, from my standpoint, they should change their jobs according to their requirement for entertainment and salary in the workplaces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and keep it in order to reap pleasure. Because they appreciate their working experienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02939380299 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5472511075 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252882387478 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089834339816 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531305457561 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149534185034 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320895394579 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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