You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.
• say how you felt about the visit
• refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her
• invite your friend to visit you
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Alex,
Just writing to let you know that I had a great time with you during this visit. We hadn't spent time with each other after we graduated from university . I'm so glad that we are closed as before .
I really enjoy the time when we went to the High Park together . It was on Thursday , right ? There wasn't a lot of people in the park , so it was the best time to watch the cherry blossom. You are still the girl who loves flower as you were in school . When we stood under the cherry trees and said 'cheese' together to take a picture, which made me feel like we were still the young girls back to university and never separated so many years .
Happy hours always short . It has been three months since I visited you last time . Now I am looking at those photos we took , it reminds me so many beautiful moments . I would like to invite you to come to my house this summer which the best season in here . If you can come with us, we will spend a great time then .
Best,
Catherine
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Alex, Just writing to let you know that I had ...
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...eat time with you during this visit. We hadnt spent time with each other after we gra...
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...other after we graduated from university . Im so glad that we are closed as befor...
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...r after we graduated from university . Im so glad that we are closed as before . ...
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... Im so glad that we are closed as before . I really enjoy the time when we we...
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...l who loves flower as you were in school . When we stood under the cherry trees an...
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...ersity and never separated so many years . Happy hours always short . It has ...
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...ity and never separated so many years . Happy hours always short . It has been t...
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...ny years . Happy hours always short . It has been three months since I visite...
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...ree months since I visited you last time . Now I am looking at those photos we too...
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...Now I am looking at those photos we took , it reminds me so many beautiful moments...
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... it reminds me so many beautiful moments . I would like to invite you to come to m...
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...his summer which the best season in here . If you can come with us, we will spend ...
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...with us, we will spend a great time then . Best, Catherine
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...h us, we will spend a great time then . Best, Catherine
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...ill spend a great time then . Best, Catherine
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16753926702 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95085362423 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0007466333 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2307692308 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233224069436 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842142116524 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099724440526 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180141747867 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612009685729 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.65 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.