You will like your child to have a day off school for a special family celebration.
Write a letter to your child teacher. In your letter:
- describe the family celebration
- explain why it is important for your child to be there
- suggest how your child would catch up with the missed classes
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing to request for a day off in school for a pupil, my daughter, Annie Banks, in order for her to participate in our family's forthcoming wedding anniversary.
Let me explain in details. It is a wedding anniversary between Annie's birth mother, Jennifer Coles and me, which would be celebrated in grand style at the Paramount Hotel, Lagos, on the 13th of May2019.
Undoubtedly, her presence in the celebration is significant because she would be taking part in the bridal formation which is a crucial part of the occasion. In fact, she would be playing the lead role in the bridal train.
Indeed, I am aware of the lapses that she might have in school courses as a result of her absence, but I would make arrangements for a teacher who will teach her some assignments in an extra class. By doing this, I am hopeful it would facilitate her catch-up with her studies.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Joseph Banks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74705882353 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71704220414 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664705882353 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0225089834 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176289297004 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663758879816 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051407971568 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689262956991 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406693821749 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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