in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.what do you think are causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them
World has been increasing health related issues and over weight is root cause of most of them.in some part of world obesity among population is increasing and health and fitness are decreasing.The causes of this problem are many in this essay we will discuss some of many and their effective measures could be to resolve them.
In some wealthy countries of the world life style became more leisure and easy.Because each and every work done by auto machines and free time increased.Peoples mostly preferred vehicles for short distance rather than walking.According to world health international reports many cardiovascular diseases are mainly due to lack of healthy activities which in turn causes health issues.Another factor is food which is more synthetic rather than biological food which have chemical and preservatives.and also spicy and oily which leads to over eating.The sodium mono glutamate Chinese salt which used in almost every processed food is extremely dangerous for health and internationally banned of its harmful effects.Further main causes of obesity and unhealthy situation is internet which made people lazy instead of playing outside mostly preferred to video games which effective society in many ways.In United states children under fifteen years are mostly over weight because of unhealthy life style.
The effective measures could be from childhood students became use to exercises and work out because technology we could not drop from life.In China mobile and gadgets are not allowed under fifteen which encourage children to play outside.Although,organic food prices could be decreased so that processed food consumption reduced,and government should high prices of process food.and also strict action should be taken against companies using harmful substances.seminar and workshop could be organized to aware public their determinant effects.
In short obesity is key to all diseases causes if increasing weight are mostly luxury life style.Another way of over weight is eating habits.Many measure could be taken to over come this problem like awareness programmes on television but this all is fail unless mind-set of population change and whole world is clear-cut about health and healthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54093567251 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1078625369 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 268.146881392 49.4020404114 543% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 473.75 106.682146367 444% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.5 20.7667163134 412% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221653030762 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157805040295 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874136192716 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157805040295 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874136192716 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.4 13.0946893788 362% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.26 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 11.3001002004 333% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.04 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.19 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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